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| Iron-Cipher (profile) wrote, on 6-5-2003 at 9:01pm | |
| Music: Revolution - Kirk Franklin Subject: Stupid story |
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well I hate to follow the trend and all, but I have about 2 or 3 paragraphs of a story for you guys to read and then you can tell me how horrible it is, and how I'm a disgrace to anyone that can speak the english language. I'm just proving a point. The cement wall stood about 14 foot tall, with a generically bland texure. Only a few cracks and crevices were present to prelude any personallity this wall possed. The old wall stood as long as anyonecould remember, and would all together be insignificant if perhps it had been anywhere else. But no, this wall and it's ominous presence sat right here, at the end of my street, where it invoked so much curiosity as to what it kept out, or perhaps, what it was meant to keep in, that it quite commonly became the talk of little children, and bickerings of old men. Old men who sat upon their porches all day, and would offer their input as to what the purpose on this wall was, Reluctant to admit that they knew as little as we did, even without solicitation of interest by us children. Growning up I lived in the small dusty town of Rockingham, Nevada. Rockingham was a small out of the way town, drawing little attention from anyone outside this little town, but that all changed. My name is Charlie, and this is the story, of a summer that the world never forgot......... Well there she is, a wet steaming pile of poop. Now in all honest give me your input. P.S. - I told you Jessie! |
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Angel_Bob | 06-05-03 10:30pm Oh my gosh! That's so horrible! You're a disgrace to the english language!
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Shinigami | Re:, 06-06-03 6:20am Not bad Nick.
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alwaysforever | 06-07-03 8:46pm Nick i love your story you are a great writer. Telling you the truth honestly i am not just saying this because i love u i am saying this because it is true! |