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sendmemoney (profile) wrote,
on 2-25-2002 at 9:29pm
Current mood: contemplative
Music: ludacris - roll out
12-26-01
*~talk to me. tell me what i can do to evoke those feelings from before ... before you walked out of my life and took with you my chance for happiness. you're perfect in every way. inside and out - nothing more i could ask. but wait, one thing. just take my heart as a token of my love. please do not return it, as i have no use for it anymore. for you are all i want. but there is nothing i can do. you are sure of what you want, and nothing i say could make any difference at all. though what you say makes all the difference in the world to me.~*
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barfinybag

UM Your poem.., 03-03-02 10:08pm

I dont like you because you told me the truth. No I like you, thats just sarcasium, actually I dont know you so never mind both of those. You told me I can't spell. I know that but, what are you can you do aboutit? Stop writing and let that hold me back from saying what I feel.Naw thats not me.We all have our imperfections.

Anyways, I wanted to say I really like your poems. Espically this one. I think it's because the relationship I was in has now ended and, I dont know I just feel like I relate with what you wrote. I like your other poems too. Your a good writer . Yeah, so thats all I wanted to say. Keep it real.

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