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tuwang (profile) wrote,
on 8-14-2002 at 11:04am
Music: Bruce Said Checkers - Why you shouldn't go
Subject: lyrics
This is a song that I wrote to an acoustic part dusty was playing, it's cool. Tell me what you think.

"Why You Shouldn't Go"

This is for you to find out
that your not the only one
someone out there is much worse off than you
And when you find out
your not the only one
would you do what your about to do

and when your alone
will you end your glow
everyone knows your consciencess
everyone knows your quite flirtatious
and by the way
you say noone cares
but I do, but I do

Some time has passed now
and we're here again
your standing there as gentle as a dove
and your saying now that
your gonna go cuz 5 people care
well people die because no one does

and now your alone
is it time to go?
and all I ask of you is to stay
not for a year but just for one day
and by the way
you say no one cares
well I do, I do

Bridge that I'm not sure of, I have it written down, but this is all in an attempt to learn the words

And now the guns
up to your head
and I am running just as fast as I can
In fear that I will lose your touch and
and by the way
you say noone cares
but I do, but I do.

tell me what you think.
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unwanted

08-14-02 11:54am

*claps* Where did the idea come from? I like it.

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tuwang

Re:, 08-14-02 12:27pm

hehehe, actually, I think it was you.

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unwanted

Re: Re:, 08-14-02 12:36pm

*scratches head* Wait a second, I'm confused. How in the world can that be about me? I don't understand.

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danibean

08-14-02 12:30pm

i like that alot... it's very pretty :)

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PinkPenguin

Re:, 08-14-02 12:40pm

yeah i agree. very cool. i like it a lot.

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crystal

your song, 08-14-02 1:53pm

I think it shows true feeling about the way you feel for this person- and your trying to tell them that even tho their life might seem like total shit at that very moment that your there, and your also trying to help--I like it

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Anonymous

Re: your song, 08-14-02 2:30pm

Very kool.

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munkysaurus

08-14-02 5:19pm

Very coherent about the emotions that your trying to express. I like it.

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