the driveway sits                

                                empty 

longingly

like my stare

and my hand

      ( slick with tears ) 

slides off

the door      ( still smelling of your kisses ) frame 

and i watch the 		driveways

and the passing cars

who drive right over

     ( my broken heart lying on ) 

the driveway.

and they			remind 

	me of times when 



you would hold my hand and

     ( understand what is wrong and )

i never planned on

you leaving		me

but that is what is wrong now.



and i am left alone

to console myself 

and dream			of

     ( your car always parked

     on the right and

     every night

     i will sit at my window 

     and miss )		 you.

08-27-02 6:25pm

beautiful.

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08-27-02 8:08pm

susan rules !

ccforlife haha <3

stace .

*greatpieceofwork*


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08-27-02 9:04pm

e e cummings... nice. I bought that book, its REALLY good, I think you might enjoy it. If you want, when I'm finished w/it, you can read it. Later!

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08-27-02 11:50pm

I LOVE IT SO MUCH I KEEP READING IT AND FEEL LIKE CRYIG..in conclusion i love you and your writing ...you are beautiful just like it...only more so ....and your beauty dosnt make me cry...it makes me smile..the end i love you bye

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08-28-02 2:42pm

i like it, its really pretty.. very creative <3

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