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| DarkSwordDancer (profile) wrote, on 9-13-2003 at :12pm | |
| Current mood: artistic Subject: ..... |
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| Ok i wrote this in english on friday and decided to post it so....yeah.... The Light I sit here at my window and stare. I stare at the world outside my window and wish i could visit there. For where I am its always dark and nothing makes a sound, where emotion is naught, and love is sought, while people sit around. These people i see are not reall they're just the people i miss I can see but cannot touch for if i try they blow away as if a whisp. A whisp of smoke , or winter breath, and they are no longer there. So i sit alone once again and stare, and stare, and stare. Its kinda corny/tacky in some places but i really like it none-the-less. |
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untitled | wow, 09-13-03 9:25pm I REALLY like that..you did a super good job |
DarkSwordDancer | Re: wow, 09-13-03 9:40pm thank you!i really appreciate that. |
Jessika | yup., 09-13-03 10:25pm I agree with Schylar.
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DarkSwordDancer | Re: yup., 09-14-03 5:11pm ty |
silversoldier | yep!, 09-14-03 5:56pm I think it's good too... but I agree, there are corny parts.... I guess it just sucks that whenever anyone really makes something they like it's sorta corny... such is life...
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DarkSwordDancer | Re: yep!, 09-14-03 7:07pm ty lol |
Jessika | Re: yep!, 09-14-03 9:45pm butbut....FROSTED flakes are better!! Corny, just with a lil added sweetness on top! |