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fadingfallenstar (profile) wrote,
on 9-20-2003 at 5:08pm
part of another song I wrote...

You held my attention with your sparkling hurtful eyes.
Shifty uneasy glares, shaky hands and a nervous laugh.
I stared up at the ceiling, unsure of what the hell I was feeling.
Followed the wallpaper boarder around the room...
Only to see it left me staring at you.
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mallosaur

09-20-03 5:13pm

wow. that is amazingly beautiful. followed the wallpaper boarder around the room..only to see it left me staring at you
thats so powerfully vivid and astouding. wow.

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fadingfallenstar

Re:, 09-20-03 5:14pm

thank you! :)

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mallosaur

Re: Re:, 09-20-03 5:16pm

you're very welcome. oh and taking back sunday is amazing. do you listen to brand new at all?

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fadingfallenstar

Re: Re: Re:, 09-20-03 5:18pm

oh yes...I love brand new!

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mallosaur

re to the fourth power, 09-20-03 5:20pm

man im listening to them right now. i love them so much their music is beautiful. i like how their lyrics are so poetic. once again, i love your writing. :)

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fadingfallenstar

Re: re to the fourth power, 09-20-03 5:23pm

thanks again, lol. Brand New is one of my fav bands! do you listen to Thursday or Saves The Day?? they are also wonderful.

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mallosaur

Re: Re: re to the seventh power, 09-20-03 5:24pm

ive heard of them but havent listened much. i like yellowcard and matchbook romance. man. we certainly have good taste lol

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fadingfallenstar

Re: Re: Re: re to the seventh power, 09-20-03 5:26pm

yes, wonderful taste. hehe. i also love those bands...but I g2g, although Id love to keep this replying game going, haha. ttyl, i'll add you.

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mallosaur

09-20-03 5:27pm

ill add you too. talk to you later!

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