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DarkSwordDancer (profile) wrote,
on 10-2-2003 at :33pm
Ok delema!Ashley,niki and justin all want me to go to the CMR game but i dont know...rar ok but anyways i wrote a poem but its kinda *blah* ok here it is

Drownding

You pushed me
and i fell.
Into a pool of whirling darkness.
No one warned me not to breath
but i did.
It entered my body
and i began to cry.
Cry for all my hard work put to waste
all my time turned to haste.
For the thing that came inside me,
was faught with valor.
For many a year i tried and tried
as hard as i could,
but it won outin the end as it thought it would.
The thing that made it into me
is not bad in anyway
or good,
maybe it is ,
but the thing that entered me,
is thee.


Once again slightly tackey but hey i can draw ,not lately ,and its my only for of word expression i like sooooooo,yeah COMMENTS??
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silversoldier

10-04-03 8:22pm

I think it's a good one!
:)

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DarkSwordDancer

10-04-03 9:28pm

TY , jessika says you gonna go to home comming!Yay, but yes im very pissed at my dad.

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