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Angel_Bob (profile) wrote,
on 10-24-2003 at 7:35pm
Subject: Currently in the process of processing an attempt to make a stab at maybe trying to suceed at writing a story
Yes.

I am writing a story about a girl. Her father is a rapist and he sexually abuses her.

I think it's off to a relatively good start.

Relatively.

I started off with a poem. I'll continue it whenever I can. It's on Fiction Press if you really want to find out how she deals with it.

Mlee updated her LOTR story so I'm off to check it out.

I hope you enjoy my first chapter.
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Feeling his hands touch me.

Again.

Grabbing, searching, yearning.

Seeing his eyes glint greedily as he finds what he's looking for.

Screaming, yelling, crying.

No one can hear me. The music drowns out all hopes and fears.

Blasting through the house.

It’s not my house.

I’m on the floor stuck beneath him.

It’s not my floor.

Fighting, struggling, praying.

I give up.

Again.

Letting him take me. Letting him take all I am. He takes all I have left to stand for and leaves me as an empty shell.

Broken, bruised, bleeding.

I'm dying here all alone.

The music still blares as he cries into the night.

As my blood soaks the carpet and the tears run down my cheeks.

This time it doesn’t stop.

He’s gone and I am here.

On that white, white carpet.

The blood soaks the carpet around my legs and runs out of room to spread.

My tears turn to blood, soaking under my neck, flowing into my hair.

I scream.
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Aerii

10-24-03 10:53pm

You should read the book "You dont know me" by David Klass...

I love you!!

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