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| brad (profile) wrote, on 11-5-2003 at 10:41pm | |
| Current mood: calm Music: johnny cash - folsom prison blues Subject: Don't make fun of me |
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| Hearts Racing Everytime I see your beautiful face I think of how much you mean to me Like a dozen roses in a broken vase We're brought together, peice by peice Walking with you I hold your hand The peices of the puzzle make a picture Walking with you together we stand Looking in your eye's for a brighter future My heart beats faster as we kiss Holding eachother, full of bliss I love you so much You'll never know With every touch Our love unfolds Okay this is my first pathetic attempt to writing some kind of poem. i just thought of it on the spot and decided to get some input. Yes, it is meant for a special person. But if you have any comments or suggestions please feel free to leave them. Bradley |
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fadingfallenSTAR | 11-06-03 6:36am i like it. its sweet. good job bradley! |
A-Fire-Inside | 11-06-03 7:08am Very nice Brad. Don't worry about what other people think about it man, as long as it comes from the heart there's no worry. |
blondie17 | 11-06-03 9:32am brad i really like the poem. it shows true art. i really really like it a lot. i think it is brilliant |
xonethousandtearsx | 11-06-03 11:14pm Hey brad!!I didnt know u could write poems...very nice,keep up the good work!!
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brad | 11-07-03 6:29am thanks you guys! =)
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| InnocentLuvin69 | Re:, 11-08-03 10:00pm Hi. I don't know you but I was looking around and I came upon your journal. I just wanted to say that I loved your poem. It was very sweet. Keep up the good work! :)
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