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| blondie17 (profile) wrote, on 11-20-2003 at 12:53pm | |
| Divots along the track So our journey begins after the twisting turmoil the kiddy roller coaster unloaded figuring our new adventure... will lead to only better times when you find yourself relading once again. the roller coaster sppeds over another hump this hump leaves a feeling unfulfilled in the least butterflies return again it takes you up the hill then falls reaching the climaz of intensity leavin you breathless whipping around all turns not knowing what's to come finding yourself debating whether you want to get on once again or leave it for once unloaded could you find a better ride? the answer unresolved the roller coaster dangerous in all respects keeps you scared problems start occurring divots along the track... it stalls and you find yourself in a tunnel wondering when it's going to start again. this is my attempt to show what is going on with relationships. anyways thanks for reading i love you all. please respond with what you think of my poem. criticism is well accepted. |
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stinko | 11-20-03 9:30pm are you talking about nasal sex?
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PHIL-HIMSELF | 11-21-03 7:06pm I'm not very poetic, but I can see you are, good jarb! |
blondie17 | Re:, 11-24-03 11:33am thanks husband. im glad you think that. |