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| brad (profile) wrote, on 12-16-2003 at 10:15pm | |
| Current mood: Tears running down my face Music: Silence Subject: "For You" |
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| The more I think about it The worse it feels The thought of our future It disappears All we've been through Nothing compares The look on your face Opens and glares I give you my heart Its all I can give Don't take it for granted It will easily chip Away peice by peice I'm yours for the taking Put the peices together My hearts slowly breaking I love you my dear I'm here by your side Forever and ever Till our pasts collide Into the present Little by little Love is a mystery An unsolvable riddle But for you I'd do anything No matter what the price I'm with you forever Our love carved in ice ~Another shitty attepmt to express my feelings. *is giving up on writing* |
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fadingfallenstar | 12-17-03 6:49am dont give up on writing, you can only get better.
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PaintedOnMyMemory | 12-17-03 4:51pm "Love is a mystery
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A-Fire-Inside | 12-17-03 8:08pm Very nice Brad. Don't give up on writing. Some things might not rhyme, some might just not sound right... but since it comes from your heart and means something... it matters. Writing is a great way of expressing yourself to yourself, or to others... you can't go wrong. |
happy-bunny | 12-18-03 6:07pm I read it and as I did I felt my heart pounding...I "melted" when I read it...I loved it... |
brad | Re:, 12-19-03 11:39pm im glad you like it kelly =) and whoever else liked it.
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