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| silversoldier (profile) wrote, on 12-29-2003 at 8:22pm | |
| Current mood: creative... maybe Music: "If I Had A Million Dollars" Subject: stuff... |
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| "The Reasons Behind" -me Walk into the bathroom. Flip on the light. Everything's a dayly routine to you. Take a piss. Rinse your face. Run your hands through your hair. Must be fixed. Then you squint, Everyday that squint. Always looking, Want to know your eyes. Say some stupid remark A farewell to me. Turn off the light. Leave this world. Inside the bathroom. Looking at my eyes. Practice for the future. Must know what they're thinking. That's the real expression. That's what they'll never hide. I can see what you want, But only when the orbs are present. Sit down, take a glass. Pick a tissue, dry her tear. Talk a little. Learn a little more. Try to seek the answer. Work to help the future. Making true progress now. She's recovering. I look deep in his eyes. I want to know what's happening. What does he want, These questions mean nothing. I can't let him do this to me anymore. It all must stop. Staring in your eyes To see what's really there. Scared of me, What did I do? So careful in the work. How did it all go wrong? You're so stupid. You look at me every day. I thought it was obvious; We're so alike. You stare at me. And I stare back. Staring in your eyes To see what's really there. Naiivity every day. Never changing. It's the reason behind All the insecurity. All the lies. All the truths. All the standstills. All the beauty of life. Look a little closer At the reflection next time. You just might learn What you always searched for. |
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Jessika | Just thought I'd say...., 12-29-03 11:55pm Therapists/psychiatrists can suck it. |
silversoldier | Re: Just thought I'd say...., 12-30-03 12:27am to be honest... that wasn't about therapists or psychiatrists... that was about schyzo little nick in the corner... |
Jessika | Re: Re: Just thought I'd say...., 12-30-03 12:34am haahaaa. Might as well be about them. And that is just what it reminded me of. Acting as a "healer of all things evil" and trying to fix all that it could.
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silversoldier | Re: Re: Re: Just thought I'd say...., 12-30-03 12:09pm ... ok, if that's what it reminded you of, fine... but you really didn't read the whole thing, then... |
Jessika | Re: Re: Re: Re: Just thought I'd say...., 12-30-03 5:54pm Who are you to know if I read the whole thing or not????? I did......I just usually think a different way as you. Is that a crime?
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DarkSwordDancer | o.o..yes, 12-30-03 9:22pm i very much like that poem....it sounds...like the constant control that one must contain while in the presence of someone they feel strongly for and with to tell them but cant.....also it seems like its a ...almost a mental search for whats really there and not the outer layer that society has force on the skin of the person....but for all i know i missed it all.... |
silversoldier | Re: o.o..yes, 12-31-03 1:52am Actually, you're really close... the first and last "stanza" are written in the perspective from the reflexion in the mirror...
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DarkSwordDancer | Re: Re: o.o..yes, 12-31-03 1:05pm o.o im never close..... |
DarkSwordDancer | 12-31-03 1:06pm NICK YOU TOLD ASHLEY THE DREAM!!!!ALL OF CMR KNOWS NOW!!!!JUSTIN EVEN QUESTIONED ME ABOUT IT GRRRR. |