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wildthing (profile) wrote,
on 1-19-2004 at 4:15pm
OMG!! Guess what! The best thing has just happend to me!! i wrote a poem and put it in poetry.com and they are taking me and 33 other ppl to an invititional party for ppl who write really good poems! and the lady from the Brady Bunch *the mom* will be there and so will Willie Nelson...a old famous country singer.....OMG! i am so happy and they nominated me as poet of there year 2004!!!!!!!!!!AHHHHHHHHH! OMFG!! here is the poem...

Hurt:
I cried because he lied
I hurt so bad inside
I can't believe i fought for him
He made me fill with happiness
And now I'm filled with saddness
We had so many good times together
Now we will be so far apart from one another
Now i must move on
Can i make it without him?
I must be strong and willing to carry on
Yes time will go by swiftly
Goodbye my friend
Now it is the end
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losingallcontrol

01-19-04 4:27pm

Good poem. Really it is.

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fadingfallenstar

just so ya know.., 01-19-04 4:36pm

thats a good poem, i like it.

but...(im not trying to be mean) that poetry.com thing is a rip off. they accept everyone who sends in a poem to an inviational. than they charge you a lot for different poetry books with your poem published. we had to send poetry to that last year for an assignment. everyone in the class got accepted. our teacher than found out and told us it was a rip off.

once again i dont mean to be an ass...or say you cant write good..but yeah.

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wildthing

Re: just so ya know.., 01-19-04 4:37pm

oh....


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wildthing

Re: just so ya know.., 01-19-04 4:37pm

oh....


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wildthing

Re: just so ya know.., 01-19-04 4:37pm

oh....


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