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silentcriez (profile) wrote,
on 1-25-2004 at 2:25pm
Current mood: bitchy
Music: kiss me fool - fefe dobson
Subject: *it hurts me to know that this time in our lives will so soon be in teh past*


yes well ive been having a pretty odd day.. and i feel really lonely.. btu hey ive been pretty inspired lately to write soo heres some more poetry cuz im just that cool :-)

this world is full of anger
cruel intentions, silver lies
lacking what is needed
sorrowing goodbyes

and ills till stand here waiting
alone and ill be cold
these chills will comfort tears which stream
this pain never b4 told

i may just be insane
i dont knwo what i feel
but this voice that hides within me
no longer can conceal

the sky blackening above me
a storm of red and whites
just teh taste of ur skin
will get me through the night

your like a drug that paralyzes me
inaudible, unspeakable i breath you
i gotta break free from your grasps
gotta stand on my own without you

i cant get addicted
ill melt for you
i hate to speak these words
but they ring true

and the pain in my eyes
should show you all you need
maybe youll be ahppy
if off of saddness you feed

take all of me in one kiss
like a withered flower i will blossom then die
silky petals falling to the ground
i guess its last call.. i guess its goodbye

and another
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the sky is darkening
and the sun hides behind clouds
you begin to undress me
lay me down
kissing evey inch of my body
i become hot and insatiable
feinding for more
i take you in, with deep breaths
like a drug you overwhelm me
in in your strong arms i am held
protected
you colide with me and i am vulnerable
so innocently you touch me
you begin toi sweat
while kissing me..
and touching me
so pefectly we fit together
and you inside me
it feels so right
liek nothing can be wrong
and when i look into your eyes
i see reflections of me
and i feel safe
lying here sweat dripping down peach skin
i am stripped of all superficial
this is me
naked
vulnerable
penetrable
take me gently

haha hope you like :-)
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krazykelc1

hi Amanda, 01-25-04 2:37pm

here's a comment for your lovely journal. I dont know what to say and as you can probly tell I'm not in the "happy" mood to write a loving little comment... so I'll just leave it at that

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