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H2OforDuo (profile) wrote,
on 1-26-2004 at 8:56pm
Current mood: depressed
Music: Revalation, by 4 Strings (my CD finaly came! yay!)
Subject: Poems I wrote today. (Please comment)
~Wings~

Let it rain,
Water pouring over me,
My hair plastered to my head.
The streets are empty,
And inside I'm dead.

I had wings once,
I could fly.
I could soar once,
But my wings have been clipped,
And now I cry.

Depression.
I try to fold my wings,
To block it all out,
But my wings don't exist.
I'm shadowed with doubt.

I had wings once,
I could fly.
I could soar once,
But my wings have been clipped,
And now I cry.
~~~~~

~Snowfall~

I lie in the snow,
Watching the downy flakes fall from the sky.
There is no sound.
The night is undisturbed,
But for my tears.

They burn my face with cold,
They burn my soul with woe,
They melt the snow with warmth,
They melt my insides as I shake with silent sobs.

When my world comes crashing down,
'm trapped underneath.

It's cold,
But I can't feel it.
I'm too numb To anything
But my sorrow.

When my world comes crashing down,
'm trapped underneath.
~~~~~

~Caro
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magical-muffin-of-doom

01-27-04 1:19am

woowweeee thats really pretty! wicked ^_^

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14outtanone

Poems, 01-27-04 10:14am

Wings:
I thought it was a good poem all together, although it seemed less than well flowing.

Snow:
Good.



Randome~
I've been trying to call you for the past two nights...why won't you pick up?

Nee

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H2OforDuo

Re: Poems, 01-27-04 6:32pm

I havent been home whenever you called! ; . ;

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