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silversoldier (profile) wrote,
on 3-4-2004 at 6:56pm
Current mood: exhausted
Subject: "Fading Memories"
Much as the leaves turn bright and fall,
Their beauty held for such short time, and softly
Strength is taken. Broken.
Fluttering to the ground to hold
Color for a short while longer.
Color, bleeding, but never leaving
Simply overtaken.

As mighty as the tree may be
Without the leaves it holds no life.
Each long arm strains at last
To hold the final colors.
Feebly, in all accounts
To watch such giants overcome
A breeze come in to play a while.

A finger slips and suddenly
Ten leaves are blown so far away.
And sad is the scene that has come to be
That all the crimson and gold
Bled away to leave behind a pool,
Brown, light, and every day
Taken away by such playful wind.

Sadder more to step away,
To see the trees collectively.
The pool belongs to not one
But to the forest together.
No more can any tree claim its color
As the breeze scatters leaves all around.
Instead the trees lie dormant, waiting for the Winter.


(Yes, this is my original work *for once* and again *for once* I am proud of this work.
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DarkSwordDancer

03-04-04 9:50pm

i very much like that poem....its great!.....yes.....hmm....


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FuzzyDragon

Ya know I'd like that poem..., 03-06-04 12:15am

If I were interested in the sorrow of trees that is. But seriously that is a good poem. Way to go Nick.

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silversoldier

Re: Ya know I'd like that poem..., 03-07-04 10:19pm

Thank you.

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Jessika

O_O, 03-11-04 12:24am

I make some sense of that suddenly....I was flipping through journals and read it again and I got meaning more than trees...wow.


Probably not the desired meaning, as I rarely see eye to eye with you on this kind of stuff, but I got some meaning out of it. Woo me!





I need to write 20 more lines of poetry for stupido writing contest :-(....wanna help me? :-D

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