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| Angel_Bob (profile) wrote, on 3-29-2004 at 5:19pm | |
| Subject: I'm insecure |
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| Mankind makes me sick. [edit 8:37] I'll know what I don't know It's harder everyday Here's the poem I wrote this morning/last night. I was on the verge of both tears and sleep. The rain was quietly falling outside and by the time I actually wrote this down on my dry-erase board, the whole point was lost to me. Anyway, it's short because the only things I think on the verge of sleep are bursts of nothing. She stood in the rain The rain Fell Floated gently to the ground Its sparkling fingers caressing the pavement Twinkling past the moonlight She spun Twirling Her sodden hair tossing droplets through the spotted sky Through the darkened air She smiled Soaked and dizzy You could not tell Her tears from the rain |
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Wasabi | 03-29-04 7:36pm Mankind...
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deloric | 03-29-04 9:15pm nice imagery in the poem. and very nice ending. I applaud thee. |
Shinigami | 03-30-04 6:18am I like the poem too. |