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sk8erch1ck23 (profile) wrote, on 4-13-2004 at 4:26pm | |
Current mood: good Music: Where the Highways End - Hidden In Plain View Subject: My Wicked Cute Poem ;) |
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yeah so uh, i had this assignment in english to write a narritive poem blah blah blah, & well i liked how mine turned out..it's about the first night me & rian met... A Night Under the Stars “The look in your eyes, sparkle like the stars in the sky. Everything about you drives me crazy, I can’t even think straight it’s all hazy.” As she was absorbing everything he said, the stars like her eyes shimmered overhead. He touched her cheek and brushed away her hair, she was entangled in his intimate stare. It was as if their hearts had collided together, they wished this moment would last forever. The emotions inside her body were rushing, the love that was trapped in her heart was now gushing. With every word her heart increased in beats, with every caressing touch she felt her knees get weak. Around them were the sounds of a summer night, unheard by ears was the sound of two hearts take flight. “I already care about you so much, it’s the feeling I get and it comes from your touch. I promise I will never cause you pain, and I will always be here, snow, sun or rain.” oh uh, don't steal it, because i'll fucking kill you, have a nice day :) |
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crimzonregret | *adds to your poem*, 04-22-04 10:57pm as jeanna is throwing her guts up in his house,
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