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| Angel_Bob (profile) wrote, on 5-14-2004 at 7:49pm | |
| Current mood: discontent Music: Yellowcard Subject: And you still came back for me... |
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| Sorry for updating so many times but I want to post my poem. I wrote this down at 1ish this morning. I wrote it in my head while thinking in the shower before going to bed and writing it down. I reworked it during school since I fell asleep right after getting my thoughts down and never re-read it. I don't like it. Review it on fictionpress if you wish or just tell me your thoughts on it here. I named it By My Troth but, by my troth, I hate naming my poems. I love you all. I never did quite heal you see Although I claimed I did I never tried to fly you know One wing broke, the other tore I never could stand up you see You knew once I fell down I never really moved you know Our shadows lurk around I’ve already jumped you see And failed to spread my wings I broke my promises you know Fell when I should fly I still can’t find my heart you see You feel my sadness grow I feel that I messed up you know By loving you too much I feel that I did wrong you see And for this I must pay I never tell the truth you know Every question’s answers lie I’ve tried to piece it all you see Bent down to find the shards I really loved to cry you know Feeling lost to empty words The tears no longer come you see Think of you every night Never quite got over you And only hope I shall |
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disturbeddragon | 05-14-04 9:27pm That's beautiful.
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