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| coreybicknerd (profile) wrote, on 11-7-2004 at 10:57pm | |
| Current mood: depressed Music: :titleandregistration: Subject: in a perfect world |
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| in a perfect world the snow flakes and the stars blended perfectly in silvers and whites through the windshield of your car on a perfect night there were christmas lights and a glow and my bed held us as captives when my words were all that you needed to know Through everything that happened i was busy picking out your flaws so focused on making a disaster i was your one and only fault Through all the fun we had through all the good times and the bad you kept the sparkle in the eye but i lost grip of your hand the pressure of today comes with a head full of noise but to no dismay i still find a clarity in your voice and i know you're better off having your own sense of self now all that i can find to want is to be the one who helps i know now that the world will never be perfect i'll always be there to tear it down i know in my mind the perfect night has a sunrise and i know i'll just have to watch the sun drown i can't say i care how bad that is. i don't write much anymore and it's not so much to be a good poem/song...it's to free this from my chest. |
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| Anonymous | 11-08-04 10:24am it's good. |
| Anonymous | 11-08-04 10:39am I also am giving you my say in it... if you want it.
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lindseyethatsme | my name is lindsey., 04-02-05 3:27pm i dont know your name. i havent even really read your journal. i was bored and searched random journals, found yours, and scrolled down to this entry. i just wanted to let you know that i myself write so much and i am currently working on a free verse/novel thing and i love this writing of yours so much i was wondering if i could possibly use it in my story and give credits to your name or SOMETHING. it is beautiful and also made me more interested in reading your journal. so i went back to the top and, again, i dont know who you are- but i am going through the exact thing- except wtih a guy. and i wanted to tell you i know how hard it is and i hope everything works out. whenever you get this comment if you could please leave me a comment on my journal or reply to me here about your writing that would be awesome! hope to hear from you soon. :) -Lindsey |