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sike-a-delic_grasshopper (profile) wrote,
on 11-12-2004 at 3:50pm
Current mood: meh
Subject: Haikus
I was bored today at school (as always) so I wrote haikus. They are slightly amusing.

That is a neat hat.
It is red and black and knit.
He took it off, sad.

Someone clicks a pen.
It is music to my ears.
Click click click click click.

Goosebumps on my skin
Rise and make me shiver, brrr.
Stupid, cheap school.

I am very bored.
We do nothing in this class.
Why do I complain?

Teacher cannot draw.
But he always trys. Indeed,
It amuses me.

What is momentum?
Something to do with speed. I
know not why we care.

Paper is a tree.
A very processed tree.
Good haiku, though.

Those penguins are brown.
I thought they were black and white.
I was wrong, so wrong.
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kthpkc

11-12-04 5:37pm

I love those haikus, they're beautiful.

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engel

11-12-04 8:27pm

kelly, that was wonderful.
I am awful at writing haikus. but your brilliance inspires me:

Strike four! time to sleep.
Run around run around STop?
Strike four! time to sleep.


hehehe <3manda

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deloric

11-12-04 10:13pm

some of them only have 4 sylable last lines?

...... im obsessive compulsive and counted them all >_>

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sike-a-delic_grasshopper

Re:, 11-13-04 4:42pm

Really? I could have sworn they were all 5 syllables. Maybe I can't count.

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kthpkc

Re: Re:, 11-14-04 2:45pm

I think the count is 5-7-5. But i'm probably wrong.

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