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| Reigning (profile) wrote, on 11-21-2004 at 11:03pm | |
| I stayed up an hour later than I wanted to writing this dumb thing, so I had to post it. I'll try revising it tomorrow, because I think it could be a lot better.. somehow. But I'm too tired to do it tonight. One by one they leave me I'm here pondering my life I know they're pretending they can't see Mindless, meaningless, useless strife I can't seem to stop sighing Will I ever feel resolve? Whining, wishing, writing, crying I wonder if I help the world at all Two by two they're leaving again I thought I felt lonely before Hated, heartless, hideous has-been Neglecting a terminal sore Here is the heavy silent mist I'm fragile, and fearing this fact My words are sounding crisp And my lips are growing cracked Three by three I'm more alone Reality is becoming distant A captivating thought is my new home Eternal love?-I must've missed it What is happening to me Peculiar sounds fill my head There's an image I constantly see And it's always coated in red Four by four I'm feeling hollow There's a figure up ahead In his wake a buzzing follows And my thoughts are filled with dread Hello, hello, who are you? What is that you say? Nonsense, insanity, lunacy too! You think in the most curious way Five by five they leave my side It's just you and me now, friend You're always there, not once have you lied Who says this plan is pretend Why do I feel such delightful glee Hello little man in my head I've got a knife, soon they'll see How the worms are fed! Six by six I chop and bash I'm swimming in their repent Swish, slice, slaughter and slash Over a river of red I'm bent Wait a moment here You're not laughing with me Friend, is this what I fear? No no, it can't, it can't be! At me you laugh mockingly And the blood on my hands appear Twisting, taunting, terrible trickery For once, the evil in your voice I hear Bodies, corpses, cadavers galore Panic ensues, and I cannot think Curse me and my mind no more Serpent, to the bowels of hell you'll sink Do not refuse my order Go away with your horrendous acts No? no?! You retort, sir? You forget what your beastly essence lacks "A body, fool!" And I reach my arms out The point of the knife at my chest Releasing one last agonizing shout Among these bodies I rest |
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paintedonmymemory | 11-22-04 6:31am That was really good, especially the ending. I liked the rhythm. |
kelso263 | 11-22-04 3:39pm Mindless, meaningless, useless strife
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