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Paradox (profile) wrote,
on 12-24-2004 at 12:33pm
Music: P. Diddy- Satisfy You
Subject: Untitled...
Well alright, soo tonight I hung out with my gurl, and I'm just blown away by the whole situation with us. I've never been so comfy with someone so quickly, I'm so open with you, and even though I am already with most people, they all lack in comparison. I just wish words could describe the feeling that I feel. Its like I have the inspiration for the most perfect poem ever, and yet, cant put it down on paper because I dotn know where to begin! Now I'm gonna say I'm a pretty good writer (not self centered) but I'm decent, and for me to say that I cant find words to write something. YEAH that says something alright. I cant wait for Xmas :)

Well alright I'm going to attempt to juss basically run off with words here and try to describe tonight...

They say that no body is perfect- but yet, when two souls, two peole who are imperfect, but yet who are perfect, and who are destined to be together meet.. what is the word for that?

Us...

What is that feeling when you get swept up in the moment? How do we stay swept up into so many more moments? how is it that moments seem to go by quicker than lightyears when were together? What causes that?

Us...

Why can I feel like I can describe anything in words but when I think about the feeling, the only describing word I can use is indiscribable? Why must I write.. then delete it? What has me in such awe?

Us...

Its us... theres really not much more I can say... Us. you + me.. you answer all my questions, while bringing more to the table which I answer for you while bringing more.. and the cycle continues. I protect you while you protect me. I hold you as you hold me. the connection we have is amazing, and theres no better word to describe this than...

Us...




Well I guess that was my crappy poem that happens when I let emotions run and get self conscience about my writing.. Lol...

Pz
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brokenmentality

12-24-04 1:21am

there really are no words to describe us, and i think you portrayed that well in your poem.

to me, its beatifull.. and then again, maybe its because i can feel what you're talking about. and its hard for me to even describe simple feelings.

however, they're by no means simple. they're so much more.
its how and what they are thats the tricky part.. to pin point them is near impossible.

tonight was incredible, you're amazing.



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jejuan

12-24-04 3:44am

you guys seem real sweet on eachother, and i'm really, truley happy you have somebody you can fall back on when you need to. you deserve her. she deserves you. erika's a great person, from what i know. but.. i don't need to tell you that, you know ;) i hope you guys stay like the way you are for a long time. happiness like that is hard to find.

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Paradox

Re:, 12-24-04 3:23pm

^^ Thanks Jeuan :)...

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