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alastar (profile) wrote,
on 12-27-2004 at 12:38pm
Music: muse
Subject: Just found this in an old notebook of mine
A Second after Death

As I lay there dead
One glance away from being alive
Silently I beg you
To fill my eyes with life
And as I lay there thinking
About what we used to have
Silently I beg you
To tell me what I am

The light slowly fades
And is wholly left behind
By the blackest of my memories
In the darkness of my mind

As I lay there so close to life
I feel I’m closer to the ledge
The all-consuming feelings
Push me closer to the edge
And as I lay there inside my mind
In a corner surrounded by emptiness
A heart full of pain is crushed
By a soul full of stress

As the life fades away
Also does the light
And all that you are left with
Is the darkest of the night

As I lay there motionless
You can’t help but stay
The life in our creation
Slowly drifts away
And as I lay there begging
For you just to leave
So I don’t have to think of
The love we used to breathe
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fallenfaces

12-27-04 8:51am

I like it.

I like the first, fourth, and fifth stanza the best.



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