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alastar (profile) wrote,
on 12-28-2004 at 3:29am
Music: Cursive - The Ugly Organ
Subject: Never Knew
You always acted so amused, and you never told the truth. I never saw the pattern; I just waited and watched as you shattered. This is my regret, for all the words I never said, and all the ones I never meant.

I want you to know that when I see you I just burn, I can tell you still suffer, and I know that it must hurt.

You always acted so amused, and you never told the truth. I could never even tell, I just stared into nothing while you fell. This is my regret, for all the things I’ve done to your head, and all the things I haven’t yet.

I want you to know that when I see you I just burn, I can tell you still suffer, and I know that it must hurt.

You always acted so amused, and you never told the truth. I never even figured, I just stayed still like inside your pictures. This is my regret, for the secrets about where I slept, and all of yours I never kept.




Well that is just horribly written.
It needs a lot of work.

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fadingfallenstar

12-28-04 9:36am

Even though you said it was horribly written, I think it was very well written. I like the idea, and how it flows. Good job, it's one of my favorites by you.

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