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| BleedingHeart (profile) wrote, on 1-14-2005 at 11:41pm | |
| Current mood: mellow Music: the secret machines - sad and lonely Subject: did you grab your sleeping bag when you hit the floor |
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| Sudden invisible movement of whispers he spares sends chills down my spine. Surprising whirlwinds sweep through his atmosphere full of haze. The smile on his face brings a nice calm breeze. This person radiates intensely warm air currents. Unseen vapors make one choke on their breath. Stillness in the gloomy air conveys vague responses. He hides in vain behind the striking gusts of wind. Unexpected silence leaves you gasping for one last breath. The days of quite flows are fulfilled with suspense. While the nights of calm drafts take you into a deep vagabond. Swift currents are found vacant giving a person the feeling of uncertainty. Drifting air leaves you disturbed with sorrow. i wrote this. for english class. compareing a person to air. i'm not sure if i like it. ***************** .did you get your heartache. .and your head rush confused. |
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whispers-to-a-scream | 01-15-05 3:57pm Oooh, go you. You got added! |
| Anonymous | 01-17-05 1:21pm i wish i was creative like that. good job! i love it. <33 |
threshershark | 01-19-05 9:47pm Hey, it's alright, I like comments. Here's what I do: Go to www.photobucket.com and grab an account. You can upload photos onto that site and it lets you link them to your journal or whatever you want. It even provides the tag code for you. Good poem, by the way. Keep on writing. |