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bleedingsun (profile) wrote,
on 2-10-2005 at 11:18pm
Music: A Pefect Circle
Subject: It's crazy, but it could work.
So I finally got an idea for my story. It took awhile, but I got one. It's about this guy who goes crazy, or develops some sort of multiple personality disorder.

It starts off with the main character in his room, saying he needs someone to talk to. He starts talking to himself like he’s another person, and starts seeing himself that way too. He starts telling himself about how he’s having a lot of problems and things lately have been going wrong.

The next day he finds out that his girlfriend cheated on him. He gets extremely sad and confused about what to do so he starts talking to himself again. His other side gets very angry and says that he should kill her. Eventually the guy gets convinced that that would be the only thing to do. He calls his girlfriend and tells her to come to his house and that they need to talk things over. He plans on killing her when she gets there.

When she arrives she apologizes and says how it will never happen again, and that she loves him. This starts to change his mind, and he realizes that he still loves her too. His other side shows up and asks what he’s doing, saying that he should kill her and how she made a fool of him. He screams ‘No’ at himself and the girlfriend gets confused because she obviously can’t see who he’s yelling at. She and his other side start talking at the same time. She keeps saying how she’s sorry and that she loves him. His other side keeps saying that she cheated once, she’ll do it again. The guy finally loses it and stands up screaming that he can’t take it anymore and runs out of the house or into another room. When he gets where ever he goes, the other him is already there, and he realizes he can’t outrun himself. His other side tells him to go and kill her, but he says ‘No, you’re crazy. You aren’t even real’ then closes his eyes and puts his head in his hands and screams ‘Go away.’ After not hearing anything for a moment, he looks up and sees that the other him is gone.

The girlfriend walks up slowly asking what is happening, and if he’s alright. He says he’s sorry, and that yes, everything is alright now.


Yeah, sounds sort of stupid in those words, but I think I can make it into something cool.
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this-acoustic-love

02-11-05 1:34am

hmm, i like the idea. reminds me of fight club.
i'd like to read it in actually story format :D

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bleedingsun

Re:, 02-12-05 2:49am

Yeah, I was hoping no one would notice.

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egotrip

02-11-05 6:49am

It sounds marvelous.

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paperheart

02-11-05 8:04am

I like it. <3

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rocketboxer

02-11-05 9:41am

i find that things are good when theres a total twist at the end. like the GIRLFRIEND wasn't real all along, or something unexpected. or she cheated on him with his alter-ego?

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bleedingsun

Re:, 02-12-05 2:49am

That's a good fuckin idea.

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allisonwonderland

02-12-05 3:56pm

what's it for? it's good, i like it a lot

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bleedingsun

Re:, 02-12-05 4:32pm

It's for TV Productions. I have to make a 20 minute movie.

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