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tails (profile) wrote,
on 2-13-2005 at 3:39pm
Music: Less than jake - Beer
Subject: Yet another song ive written in vain
Just Tell Me What You Think

Title: Needles And Thread


spoon after spoon
lighter after lighter
needle after needle
fix after fix
meet me behind the school at six
ive got the goods and youve the got cash
come on pump it lets get high off our ass
its only one little syringe
what could such a metal do?
just ignore the warnings
i can promise you
the next thing you see will be the morning

Sweaters in the summer time
dark shades to hide myne eyes
the itching inside me burns to be free
just please god stab me
its so damn warm you see
flows deep, becomes part of me
messages written in blood
stained with chemicals
heat it up its far to cold
hurry pour it now im growing old
my eyes are heavy wake me up
forget waiting, shoot me up

grab the wire and the tubes
up goes my sleeve down goes the dues
pump my palm together
get the red pain flowing through
my fingers are numb this ones up to you
dont be afraid just press it through
break the skin, bruise my vein
my flesh will bleed
my heart will beat
my eyes will flee the scene

staring at the scars on my arms again
thinking of how good it would feel to rip them open
this room is dark, im all alone
im shaking, i wish to go home
i fucked it up im here for good
at least my beds not metal
and my sheets arent white...
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this-acoustic-love

02-13-05 6:20pm

I love these lines:

"just ignore the warnings
i can promise you
the next thing you see will be the morning"

and

"Sweaters in the summer time
dark shades to hide my* eyes"
i'm very familar with both of those

i really liked the whole thing, there were just some parts i was confused about..:

"grab the wire and the tubes"
i'm not sure what "wires" and "tubes" are supposed to mean, i've never heard of either being involved

"pump my palm together"
i think i know what you mean, like when you squeeze your hand, like pump your fist before you shoot? maybe you could word it different?

overall i really love it. for someone who hasnt even seen heroin from across the room, let alone done it themselves, you've got a pretty good idea about it.





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tails

Re:, 02-13-05 6:59pm

yeah squeeze would work better but i dont know what to use for the stuff that you tie around your upper arm to pinch the vein so i said wires and tubes like i know people use medical tubes with the wires in them the big floppy yellow things


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jayzulla

Re: Re:, 02-14-05 12:35pm

Some people use belts.

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tails

Re: Re: Re:, 02-14-05 9:26pm

that would be wicked to see some guy wip his belt off and start shooting up.

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this-acoustic-love

Re: Re: Re: Re:, 02-14-05 10:34pm

i used a belt.
and no, its not really 'wicked.'

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my-self

02-13-05 9:58pm

I like it. Now that music needs behide it needs to rock and you'll have a pretty damn kick ass song.

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cherylee

02-13-05 11:32pm

speechless

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