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| brutisimo (profile) wrote, on 4-7-2005 at 12:31am | |
| Passing she is grey and gone translucent skin stretched taught over jutting bones she smiles at her reflection through sunken holes where crystal seas used to ebb and flow as she pulls skeletal fingers through rapidly thinning hair bangles sing a mournful tune all the way down to her elbow she cant hear the words we say she wont listen she just smiles ignoring her clothes reeking of tears shed as she passes from room to room slowly fading newly revised poem...feedback bitches, do your girl up right! |
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michellestar | 04-07-05 10:29am I like it. It seems darker than something you would normally write. Good visuals. |
Fanelia | 04-07-05 11:12am I like it too, it's very interesting. Good job. :-D |