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alastar (profile) wrote,
on 6-13-2005 at 9:25pm
Music: Finch
Subject: I am your father, your mother is this pen

Heavy eyes push uncontrollable looks
Release the pressure with needles and hooks
Pushing past all the instincts in nerves
With knives and glass, cut crescent curves
Replacing veins with tubes and wire
Like water in oceans and flames in fire
Which way should you move?
Trapped on the lines of this schism
Cut too deep and got caught on a groove
Hesitation gives way to paroxysm
Parallel to indecision
A mark on your cornea marks the depth of your vision
Near-sighted, frightened, and mortified
A tattoo on your chest says “[W]hor[e]rified”
And through all of this I realized
You’re just a part of a poem, a couple of lines
I’ve been holding you captive inside my thoughts like a tomb
Gestating ideas inside my mind like a womb
And finally, giving birth onto paper, you’re spilling out of my pen
You’re a creative process, and I don’t see an end
You’re a font with underlines
I can italicize
And bold you to make you seem like more than just a word
You're nothing more than twisting design, doesn't that hurt?
You are nothing more than spiraling inspiration
Conceived in my mind, you are my creation
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jax

06-13-05 10:18pm

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alastar

Re:, 06-13-05 10:59pm

I hope that means you like it. I can never tell.

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wonderbreadland

06-14-05 5:42am

Near-sighted, frightened, and mortified
A tattoo on your chest says “[W]hor[e]rified”
And through all of this I realized
You’re just a part of a poem, a couple of lines


love it!

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alastar

Re:, 06-14-05 11:40am

For some reason, I thought of you while writing that part, and I knew you would like it.

Thanks.

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anachronism

06-15-05 11:35am

A tattoo on your chest says [W]hor[e]rified.
And through all of this I realized
You're just a part of a poem, a couple of lines


and

And finally, giving birth onto paper, you're spilling out of my pen
You're a creative process, and I don't see an end
You're a font I can underline
And bold to make you seem like more than just a word


Awesome.

How do you write so damn much and never have any of them suck?

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alastar

Re:, 06-15-05 1:40pm

Thanks, and, I have no idea. I'm taking a break though, no more writing for a week.

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