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Upchuck (profile) wrote,
on 2-26-2003 at 3:40pm
Current mood: artistic
Subject: To my darling
Your eyes glow brighter than the light of a thousand stars.
Your hair shimmers like a still lake in a beauteous sunset.
You skin is as soft as the finest silk made in a foreign land.
If given the chance I would worship you.
I would fall upon my hands and wash your feet.
I would serve you and follow all of your commands.
I would be only so lucky to taste your sweet nectar of life.
And if only for a short time I were to give in to my desire,
I would lose everything that I have worked for.
Why He would give me a desire like this, I will never know.
If it is only for me to desire Him, in the same way I desire you so.
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mystickittie

02-27-03 9:25pm

that was one of the most beautiful things i have ever seen you write..

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Upchuck

Re:, 02-28-03 10:07am

Not really.

It is so incredible cliche and I didn't even make an attempt to rhyme until the very last couplet. It says exactly what I wanted it to with no hidden meanning, which isn't good.

It wasn't at all what I wanted. It was just more to keep me from feeling sorry for myself. It sucks!

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