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godessalthena (profile) wrote,
on 2-21-2015 at 5:24pm
Current mood: curious
Music: the indiest shit your earholes have heard
Subject: .... steppin out (bjorne) ....
so, a creative bug has hit me, and i have written my first song. please keep in mind this is a rough version and is subject to change. at this point i only have the lyrics, but i think i know what key i want to write it in and am working out how i want it to sound. i am, nevertheless, filled with an exuberant amount of pride at this. and while i may feel extremely exposed, please enjoy:


mama's putting on her face
noticed she hasn't changed her top
maybe i'm letting nerves get the best of me
but something was definitely off

pushing things back to a quarter to eight
the butterflies start to churn
warm, soft, little fluffy buddy
black eyes peaking through as if to say
"oh mama please don't go!"

(chorus)
oh mama please don't go
all i want is a little time with you
you can't say "i'm steppin out
and you can't come with me..."

this has to be a joke, you can't put on that coat
mama leave your shoes were they are
please say we are going for a walk
something tells me that's a no
oh mama please don't go...

(chorus)

once my pleas have worn me down
and i find myself comforted by your shoes by the door
you'll find me here patiently waiting
while you're gone steppin out..

(maybe another chorus)



thoughts? ideas? please be kind!
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goodbye

02-21-15 9:52pm

It's cool! I can't wait to hear it.

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