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hrm.. first time I created a community.

Probably will be a big flop XD

Anyway, this is for people who wanna show off to everyone and brag about how good their poetry ish XP!!

j/p j/p, really, this is a place where people can post their poetry and get critiques and whatnot from other people =]

Cursing is allowed. I curse a lot anyway lmao.

This is also a place where you can post a poem not written by you if you feel it is really well-written. If you do give credit to the author by telling us his/her name before or after the poem.

Anyway, one of my poems. Pre-written, but w/e

Bask in the shadows of mercy
Ride the waves of despair
Fall in the pits of doom
No one will care

Watching happiness is painful
For those who are lost
Cause being happy and joyful
Is a path they yearn to cross

Keep all of it inside
And let it eat you away
The pain killing you slowly
A price that you pay

Hide the pain with a smile
Don't let anyone know
The tears building up
You can't let them flow

You're now but a void
Broken and alone
But don't let them see it
Only happiness is shown

Taking all your joy and pride
And all emotions too
Destroying everything
That was uniquely you

So how can you win
This unbeatable war?
Is there actually anything
Worth fighting for..?

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