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purplesmurfs (profile) wrote,
on 1-13-2004 at 3:22pm
Awakening from a bad dream
I feel the burning in my heart
Dont want to believe it
But the dream has come true
You've left me all alone
Without a single goodbye
A thousand tears have been shed
Several months gone by
I guess this is what I get
For loving you, for loving at all
Still lay awake at night
Asking myself why you left
And my heart starts beating
Flashbacks of your sweet kisses
Start flooding my mind
Breaking out into a cold sweat
Falling to my knees
As I scream your name
The beating of my heart
Suddenly slows to nothing


...I need a different ending.. Any suggestions, or idea's?
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box

01-14-04 6:18pm

No, I like it the way it is. :)

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allyson

10-14-04 8:23pm

that how thing described how I felt previously. Except I didn't scream anything and my heart didn't slow to nothing.. obviously.. haha

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