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alastar (profile) wrote,
on 2-26-2004 at 10:32pm
Current mood: Infatuated
Music: Something Corporate - Hurricane
Subject: I'm surprised I've made it this long.
Finally finishing I realized I wrote for no one

I wrap my heart, tightly around yours
And watch the love take its course
I breathe in your soul as you breathe in mine
I stay with you so we stay alive

I must have lost track of time
All the while with you in mind
I watched the setting sun and then
I guess I watched it rise again

I’ve been here so many times before
But I can’t help it that I still want more
You make me work so hard to touch you
But it’s always worth it when I finally do

I can feel my eloquence running thin
As I touch my lips to your soft skin
So I’ll just hold my voice tonight
As if I had a choice tonight

I slide my hand across your fingers
On my lips your taste still lingers
And I’m fine as you leave me behind
With all the things we’ve said tonight





Is it worth four days of writing?
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Wasabi

02-26-04 11:39pm

Beautiful.

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alastar

Re:, 02-27-04 3:09pm

Thanks, I think it's one of my best.

By the way, do I know you?


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Wasabi

Re: Re:, 02-28-04 10:39pm

No, you dont.
I write poety too.

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allisonwonderland

02-27-04 5:53pm

ronnie that rocks.. so worth the 4 days!!

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alastar

Re:, 02-27-04 8:43pm

well thank you allison

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darthavok

02-27-04 9:07pm

Its worth the four days, great job on it.

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Kate

02-29-04 11:06am

Good Job, Ronnie-Jonnie.

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alastar

Re:, 02-29-04 9:13pm

Thank you Kat, Thank you very mucho.

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daisymae

06-12-04 9:32pm

thats really good.

sorry, found you through random journals and read that....yeah.

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