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| onceagainistandalone (profile) wrote, on 5-3-2003 at 9:27am | |
| so i decided to sit in my car 6th hour with the radio blasting, AC on, and an open notebook in front of me...this is one of the things that came out..the other is just nonsense that i wrote while waiting for something to come to me. I don't know what to call it.."Untitled" is pretty cliche..so i tentivley titled it: "A Reflection on Suicide." I want the wind to be cold As it brushes my face I want to look upon my home From my vantage point And forget it ever existed "He had so much potential." the relatives will say But I don't care I want the wind to be strong As it tries to blow me away I want to look upon the world From this vantage point And get that feeling of warmth That I know I will never get again "What a waste." The onlookers will say But I don't care I want the wind to be at my back As it helps me along my way I want tears of happiness to flow As I look up at my ever shrinking vantage point "What a selfish act." my friends will say But I don't care If I feel the comforting cold Of the concrete One last time Maybe then I will care. - Yeah, so its no Shakesperian sonnet, but for being whipped up in the heat of the moment with no real pre-thought going into it..it really means alot to me is what i guess im trying to say. comments, whatever, I don't care. I need to go play music now. |
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lilschaub | 05-03-03 11:29am i thought is was good!! |
catrenegade | 05-03-03 3:53pm Ahhh...this is awesome!!! You rock so much. I like this so much that I'm gonna use it for an art project....all credit goes to you, of course ;) |
onceagainistandalone | Re:, 05-03-03 10:53pm you need to explain to me about what you're going to do..just because im not a very visual person..im more musical.. |
| catrenegade | Re: Re:, 05-04-03 2:34am Aight...whenever I like a poem I print it out in pretty font (or I write it cool, but this one is too long) and then I put art stuff around it. Like if I write a poem about fall I'll make a stick frame out of twigs and do something with dead leaves...or I had a poem about a car crash and I broke all these bottles and put scrap metal around the outside and put the broken glass over certain words so they were magnified....stuff like that. Sometimes I give em to people and I've entered an art show once or twice..but pretty much it's just projects for myself. |
onceagainistandalone | Re: Re: Re:, 05-04-03 10:46pm cool, what are you going to do for this one though? |
| catrenegade | Re: Re: Re: Re:, 05-05-03 12:53pm I don't know..I'll keep you updated though |
radioradiohead | 06-05-03 10:40pm I really liked it. It's better than anything I could ever do. Of course, that's not much....damn, I'm boring.
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