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sushininja (profile) wrote,
on 7-8-2003 at 3:23pm
Current mood: What? Happy?
Music: In Flames
Subject: Lonely Bench
A man, Incomplete
Looking out from his bench
He laughs as he cries
For it is a beautiful thing he sees
Seeing this man’s tears
She comes and wipes them
For this is what she does
She rights all wrongs in him
She makes the sun shine
Though the tattered clouds that are him
Life has changed for him,
In a way he will never know
For she meant the world to him,
And all he ever did was watch

Quote of the day:
"I'm gonna love you,
Until the heavens' start the rain
I'm gonna love you,
till the stars fall from the sky"
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sushininja

07-09-03 11:03am

I've written a happy poem! Yay!

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shiznit05

Re:, 07-09-03 11:38pm

i like your happy poem doug, but then again i like the not happy ones too...maybe i just like poetry

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nomatter62

yay!, 07-11-03 7:38pm

I don't think it matters about the mood of the poem, just the quality. I really liked it. Yay! *stands up and applauds*

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