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| kelso263 (profile) wrote, on 1-23-2004 at 11:51pm | |
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| Sweet dreams held between Trials fade the time you wait I still see that smile on your face Even through the darkness Lighting up my world But I still see you like the first time An unchanging picture in my mind But I still see you like the first day As hard as I try I can’t make you fade Goodnights and the little fights Cold days, forever and always A time and a place for us to go, then Holds a place forever when You don’t seem to show, again And I still see you in that same way A smile folded onto your face And I still see you in that same place A mood forever left unchanged But I still see you there And you still seem to care I still see you I still see you I always see you When I close my eyes… Just wrote this tonight. I know this is the wrong journal for the poetry stuff entries...but...who cares? Some people do of course, but, i haven't for awhile, and it is my journal. |
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Kate | 01-24-04 12:22pm That's really good, Ron. I kept reading stanzas and thinking, "I'm gonna tell him I really like this one," then I'd read another I liked, then another, and then it became the majority of the poem. So I'm just going to say, you did a good job overall. |
| kelso263 | Re:, 01-24-04 3:10pm Well thank you very much Kat, your comment made me smile.
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allyson | 01-24-04 2:45pm It made me feel.. |
rere12389 | 01-25-04 9:46pm omg that was really good! i think thats like my favorite poem of yours. |
| kelso263 | Re:, 01-26-04 2:51pm like omg...thanks!!
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