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Rina (profile) wrote,
on 3-6-2004 at 8:22pm
Current mood: bouncy
Music: rest in peace
Subject: I seem to like the endless today
i was remembering some things from when i was little.

boys are silly.

tomorrow sydney is coming over! it makes me feel like
this ---> (:
we shall party.

i slept in today. until 12:10. ah, so refreshing. considering i had been up for 21 hours, it was no surprise, but hey..

im going to get a little book to put all my poems in :) i have some in a notebook thing, but it looks more like a journal, and its a little big.

i have worked up the courage to post one (:

"Shadows of Secrets"
in the corner
of a bright happy room
there is a secret
a secret no one can see
it moves swiftly
like the falling sky
it doesnt touch or feel
its iridescense lurks in your mind
probing the dark depths
even when the light gives you comfort
it is there
its the invisible menace
the fear you've always encountered
and a nightmare that never ended
its a shadow
that thrives in darkness,
yet basks in light
so tell me
tell me your beautiful secret

..thoughts?
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lovethehibiscus

yaaaay, 03-07-04 12:39am

aww i lobe it!!
ze speedY

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Rina

Re: yaaaay, 03-08-04 5:15pm

thanks :)

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dreamiecloud

03-07-04 9:44pm

your poem. is so pretty.
when i was wee, i thought there was a b at the end of poem. like climb. i spelled poemb.

:). you can laugh at that.

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Rina

Re:, 03-08-04 5:16pm

hahahahaha.
you were a silly kid. silly yet slightly disturbing with the whole moth thing.. lmao i still love you though (;

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crawlie

coolness, 03-08-04 10:46am

i like very much .. you are a good writer. :0)
-crawlie

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Rina

Re: coolness, 03-08-04 5:22pm

yay much thanks :)

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